2013年6月英语六级考试作文真题及范文 Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay commenting on the remark “A smile is the shortest distance between two people”. You may cite some examples to support you view. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
难度:
典型的谚语警句型的文章,相比其他三篇难度低很多,谚语本身非常好理解,并且是最好用谚语警句模板套用的一篇。
思路:
第一段:开篇引用+表义(微笑缩短了人与人的距离)+深意(生活中,我们应该微笑面对他人)
第二段:正能量(微笑的魔力,比如可以让我们交到更多朋友,可以化解尴尬,对于商家来说微笑可以带来更多商机等,还可反面论证一下,没有了微笑, 生活就会失去温暖和色彩,等等)+举例(必须要举例!题目要求了。可以写某企业微笑服务取得成功,或者你自己参加面试因为微笑所以获得面试官认可等)
第三段:再次强调微笑的重要性+我们自己具体应该怎么做
范文:
Earth, as a remark has it, provides enough to satisfy every man’s need, but not every man’s greed. In other words, natural resources of the world are abundant enough to meet the demand of human beings. Nevertheless, should people exploit natural resources of the Earth recklessly and excessively, these resources would be exhausted one day. Simple as the remark may sound, it conveys a thought-provoking notion that we should effectively protect, rationally exploit and economize on natural resources.
Saving such resources as water, coal, oil and wood could ensure the sustainable development of the society and environment. Otherwise, nothing would be left for the future generation. The Amazon rainforest, which is called the lung of the Earth, is a case in point. Due to deforestation, the area of the Amazon rainforest has been dwindling year by year and many species there are endangered.
In short, we have only one Earth. On no account could we exploit natural resources excessively. Hence, it is imperative for us to cherish and protect the nature for the benefit of future generations and ourselves. Only in this way can we preserve a beautiful, harmonious, abundant and varied world. |